A reminder about the SVC Writing and Poetry Competitions
Entries are due to your English teacher by the end of the term, ie next Friday 25 September. You still have time to work on and submit your masterpiece!
Author ‘Visit’ by Rachel Givney
On Monday 14 September, Rachel Givney, ex-student and author of Jane in Love, very generously shared her time and knowledge with Mrs Ginzburg’s Avid Readers’ Book Club and with Year 11 English Advanced, who have just finished a study of Pride and Prejudice and Bride and Prejudice. Jane in Love is the story of how Jane Austen travels to the present day. She must decide between her love of her career and her love of love. What will she do? Which will she choose? What are the sacrifices in choosing one over the other?
We are very grateful to Rachel for being so supportive of our young readers and writers. She entered into our discussion of character in Book Club. With Year 11 Advanced she showed us an example of a script and explored the difference between a script and a novel - it's all in the dialogue and action. Austen’s focus on dialogue and action, and not description, makes her very easy to work with on film.
Rachel left us with the very pertinent advice: Don’t get it right; get it written. This can apply to all creative pursuits, but also to every piece of homework and every assessment activity.
Here are a few comments from Year 7 students:
Alexandra Haddock: Speaking to Rachel Givney, author of Jane in Love, was an extremely good experience. As a group, we asked her many questions; where she had drawn inspiration from, how she had structured the novel and how she came to write the novel. I was very grateful for the chance to meet with Rachel Givney and loved every moment of our meeting.
Lily See: I think talking with Rachel Givney was a great experience. It taught me more about Austen's novels and more about becoming a writer too.
Lily O’Loghlin: Meeting Rachel Givney was a very fun and inspiring experience and I loved hearing her insight on Jane Austen and novel-writing.
Leila Spies: I really appreciated the opportunity of talking to Rachel. I loved the fact that she was an ex-Vinnies' student and that she went on to do something great!



English Extension 2
Congratulations to Bibi O’Loghlin and Gisele Weishan who have completed their Major Works for English Extension 2. Bibi has completed a satirical poetic drama script which dismantles the distinctions between high and low art to provide a humorous piece of social commentary about the machinations of the theatre world. Gisele has written a hybrid magical realist short story which appropriates the Eurydice myth, and offers a feminist critique of reader response theory. Both pieces are original, provocative and reflective in the way that they challenge assumptions about the way we interpret and consume literature.
Teaching English Extension 2 is a great privilege. Sure I am biased in thinking it is the best HSC course on offer; it encompasses everything that deep learning should be about - passion, imagination, creativity, critical thinking, research, reflection, risk-taking, collaboration and importantly - failure. It is such a rewarding experience to have the opportunity to work closely with students who are willing to do all these things in order to craft a polished piece that they are truly invested in. Both Bibi and Gisele have been exemplary role models in the way they have embraced the spirit of this course. It is no doubt difficult to maintain the same level of motivation when working on a single project for a significant period of time. However, Bibi and Gisele tirelessly drafted, drafted and drafted, edited, edited and edited. Sometimes it was hard for me to keep up with them!
Thank you Bibi and Gisele for allowing me to be part of your Extension 2 journey. I have learnt so much from both of you. May you continue to make your literary mark on the world in years to come!
Bibi and Gisele’s Major Works will be on display in the Library.
From Bibi O’Loughlin: The first thing that comes to mind when I reflect on English Extension 2 is that it is a very strange course - the best type of strange imaginable.
The majority of HSC courses set the agenda for what you will learn. Sure, you’re encouraged to contribute your ideas to items on this agenda, but ultimately, a syllabus is a syllabus and must be followed. When I began Extension 2 I realised that in this course I could set this agenda myself. Ms Playoust, our incredible Extension 2 teacher, gave me a piece of advice early in the course that is the most critical guidance I would pass on to an Extension 2 student - write about what you can’t stop thinking about, what keeps you up at night. Initially this terrified me. What if the concepts that fascinated me were interesting only to me? Or what if I lacked the ability to express them in my Major Work?
In hindsight, I know that at that point in the process I undoubtedly lacked that ability. I initially held myself to an impossible standard, telling myself that if I was going to take the course I must write perfectly or else I wasn’t worthy of being an Extension 2 student. The first drafts of my Major Work indicate very clearly that I was far from perfect. In Extension 2 you are still a learner. The difference is you get to decide what you want to learn. For me, it was how to write a script and how to explore my specific concept within that format. Extension 2, at least in my experience, is not an opportunity for perfect writers to create perfect works but for flawed writers to become less flawed writers.
Extension 2 forms an unusual relationship between the student and their Major Work. My relationship even to my completed Major Work is fraught. I have been at varying times passionately in love with it and full of vehement hatred for it. I have felt entirely confident in my ability as a writer one day and completely lost faith in it the next. Like with any project worked on for an extended period of time, I lost passion for it regularly. I dreaded working on it. But paradoxically, the next day I would find myself unable to resist writing it. The joy of setting your own agenda for a course is that you will always be lured back to it.
Extension 2 is strange and often at times challenging, which is why my classmate Gisele and I were so fortunate to be taught by the unwaveringly supportive Ms Playoust. Ms Playoust gave us the greatest gift I believe a writer can receive - enthusiasm for your work when you yourself can’t muster it. Without that enthusiasm I likely would have been overcome by self-doubt early on in the process. Ms Jarman should also be credited with providing Gisele and I with constant support and feedback throughout the course. It was with their support that we were able to complete our Major Works. I am thrilled to have completed Extension 2, not mainly because of the end product but because the challenges it involved made me a better writer. It is an experience I would highly recommend.
From Gisele Weishan: I had decided I wanted to study the English Extension 2 course even before it was an option for me to undertake. The anticipation and my excitement building throughout Year 11. At the time, I just imagined myself spending the year writing creative stories as I so loved to do. Though it was often said to me, the English Extension 2 course was indeed not what I expected. For one, it was a much more exhausting process than I had initially imagined in such reveries of what it would be like. It demanded more critical engagement with academic articles than I had ever been exposed to, unleashing the JSTOR floodgates upon me full force. It sometimes stretched my mental capacities to the brink of what felt like near intellectual insanity. These to name a few.
Throughout my facing the realities of this course, there were times when I doubted my abilities to successfully surpass the challenges of this course. But whilst the course and my Major Work itself were not what I expected they would be, they surpassed such limited expectations I had initially held and ultimately made the successes I achieved all the more rewarding. English Extension 2 engaged me in such unique learning experiences, placing me as the master of my own learning experience whilst being greatly aided by incredible teachers making it a truly extraordinary course to study in Year 12.
Reflecting back on when I sat in that first class, I can clearly see how much I have grown not only as an English student and writer but also as an individual seeking to be critically minded in the society in which we live. I would definitely recommend that those seeking to undertake the English Extension 2 journey with an open mind and sturdy readiness to face the hard but enjoyable tasks ahead should jump in. And to those who do, I wish you the best of luck in creating something that will surely be amazing!


What the English Department have been reading/listening to/viewing:
Ms Jarman | Hamlet by Maggie O’Farrell | This is a fascinating story of the love between two quirky people: William Shakespeare and the otherworldly Anne Hathaway. It also provides a fascinating reading of Hamlet - a song of grief for Will’s son, Hamnet. |
Ms Jarman | The Assistant - film maker / director Kitty Green | This is a gripping film for the #MeToo era. A wonderfully subtle scene between the complaint and the masterfully manipulative HR Mr Fix-it. |
Ms Jarman | Jane in Love by Rachel Givney | Ever wondered why it is that Jane Austen can write about love so knowingly? Well, here is the answer. This novel imagines Jane Austen travelling through time, to fall in love with a modern-day-Bath-dwelling history and English teacher. Will she stay or go? For all Persuasion fans. |
Ms Jarman | White Tears, Brown Skin by Ruby Hamad | A challenging read about the privileges enjoyed by white women and the impact of that power on the lives of brown women. When white women claim victimisation at the hands of women of colour, what are the consequences? |
Ms Jarman | American Dirt by Jeanine Cummins | A pacey read about the treacherous journey that South Americans make to Estados Unidos. Why do they? How do they? What is the journey like for women? Children? A painful insight into the plight of refugees and migrants. |
Mrs Mano | The Zanzibar Wife by Deborah Rodriguez | A compelling read. It’s a complex story of clashing cultures and conflicting beliefs, of secrets and revelations, of mystery and magic. What else could you ask for? |
Ms Marshall | The Overstory by Richard Powers | A novel about trees that is quite incredible. The plot explores how seven different characters' lives are connected by trees. You’ll never look at trees in the same way again. |
Ms Playoust with her daughters | Film - Queen of Katwe directed by Mira Nair | Based on a true story and directed by one of my favourite Indian female directors (she directed Monsoon Wedding), this is a captivating biopic depicting the life of Phiona Mutesi, a girl living in Katwe, a slum of Kampala, who learns to play chess and becomes the National Female Champion. Heartbreaking in parts, inspiring in others - a great film to start discussion with the whole family. Top that off with strong messages about empathy, humility, integrity, perseverance and teamwork and the ending will have you in tears (of joy!). |
Ms Monica Jarman
Head of Department English